That's destine for a heaven spot mn. I'd say go grab some buckets and let's see it painted mate. but consider taking the white around it instead of having a black outline and black fill. I think that will give the letters a little more readability. Overall that's a solid piece imo

 

I was talking for the top piece but thanks anyways. I havent even tried a roller yet but I've always been into them.

 

is there a reason im not getting any Crits??

MN - notice how ur MU are both leaning in the opposite direction of ur ESR, it would look better if they were all leaning in the same direction. But every thing else about it looks good, ur stuff is looking better every time

 

lil practice this morning.

@ewl - be patient you'll get ur crits, keep on bro

@MN - I like it, is this something ur testing out or been doin?

@germer - I see ya, nice letters

 

@Ewl - I tried doing that actually lol make it seem like the M and the R and pulling away from each other

 

for nark

 

This was big fucking fail, was testing some shit. Not even going to finish it. But any tips on somethings that worked/why it didn't work?

 

Syn: The 3d is a little off. The curve on the R is the worst part of the 3d. I think the K/E is a bit odd. I like the E, but I think having it curve at the bottom and lean on the K would have worked a little better. The R doesn't seem to fit the style. It looks a bit more plain and has a lot of dead space under it where the rest of the piece has none. I wouldn't say a complete fail. You're getting better that's for sure.

 

came up with a new throw today, any crits?

Picture 170 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

It looks good, i just think the W is whats throwing it off.

 

Try making your letters a little less lifeless. Think of a throw as a gang sign. You want it to be thrown up looking like, "AW FUCK YEAH," not like a limp dick. When I have a day that I'm not doing anything, I'll come into the Toy thread and do quickies to help people develop throwies, because throws are the hardest thing to make for yourself when you're a toy. I sucked SO hard at throws. haha.

 

thanks man, yeah i realize i need to put more flow into them, heres another straight for crits

Picture 171 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

your base bars in the K and R are too thick. You want consistency.

 

bottom page bump, for crits

 

its one of my first.....any tips? i would be thankful

 

A lil something... trying some new stuff out and I was bored. =/ Tell me what you guys think! Please if you can give me any tips on improving and getting better I'd much appreciate it. C&C please! Thanks!

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Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters

colored this in today, crits are always welcome

 

@tasty styles there and all and structures pretty good but i think its sloppyyyyyyyy
@poisn wowww work on structure more.....do nice block letter just like you see on your keyboard
@sync pretty sweet man im diggen but then again im not..not sure wut it is but overall pretty dope
@ewal not diggen the a' but the rest is alright man keep em comin

 

Revised over a few things.

Gemer - Nice sketchin'

Skate - That mos' recent one keep up on that, big difference

Tasty - Not feelin' it son

Poison&Syn - Jump on the alphabet keyboard letters bandwagon ma dudez.



Ewl&Sync - Nice colors n' all that but your letters could flow in a differnt way na mean.