im not gonna entertain your stupid fucking opinions any longer.you suck, so does everything you have ever written on bs or otherwise, eat shit and die.
yo stick to the notepads n blackbooks. Thats not appealing to the eye whatsoever. Get a feel for your throw on paper n then practice it somewhere private till its street worthy. keep at it tho im not tryin to discourage.
that throw needs an outline bro, should've used the white for that rather than doing lighting. And, not to be a dick, but those leaves or whatever just look wack.
Well might of turned out better if you had an actual outline but your letters are definately distinguisable and whats the little like pot leaf coming out the end? Don't have that unless its gonna be like some godlike thing of art and the colors of the leaf dont't mix with the rest of the piece make sure all your colors flow, Your A is a little bit to small your throwie would be better if it didn't seem so outline, its a decent throwie you just need to work on the little stuff. Work on keeping the size of your letters the same Color flow Work on your little star thing in the bottom doesn't look right Keep it on the paper before you go out, no point in wasting a wall if you don't even have down what your gonna throw up
See how the lines on your piece are all squigly and unclean? Work on smooth solid strokes of the hand while maintaining the right angle with a wall. If you clean those up, and don't go over your outline with bars from the 3d, yo shit will improve bunches. Bombing helps with these things and I just thought of this(these are all things I myself do a shitty job with) when you are going in for one big line on a letter you just gotta pound that outline into your head you know? Like when you got this huge long line you gotta get out on like the side of an o or any big curve and you just fuck it up halfway through? Shit's a buzzkill.....this kinda turned into me ranting but whatever
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ey yo phats, i gots to say somthin bout your peice. I would shorten all those extensions on top bars of p and t nad a's middle bar. bit thicker boath middle bars on h. the top and bottom bars of s are too wide and s in not in proportions. Fill seems fine to me, could be also a bit cleaner. Highlights are fine. Mistakes in 3D dont bother me, but bg is complete bullshit phat, wtf u doin? Im sure you can do it better.