Biggaty Bump for some Crits, posting another tomorrow when I work on em in class.

 

I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.

 

bored as hell over here. yea this dudes gon lost his hand

 

crits? lines are kinda rough cuz im using sharpies and thin ass graph paper


Picture 184 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...

 

another one i did in the ofice, my boss has nice markers lol

 

thanks, yeah i try to practice as much as i can, and just getting the hang of the new name

 

some jokes lil tings i sketched up, dans is my buddy


Picture 188 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 189 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 187 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 185 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

your B looks like something that isnt a B

it would be better with circles as holes??

 

you keep posting the same shit shit and no progreess fuck of

 

@knowtheledge Veery clean pen work Know. I'd like to see you throw some flow into your pieces. They're a little static and 'uninteresting'. Not bad, just not a lot of movement.
@skatejunt I like the energy you there at your work. Don't lose that. Try to tighten up the letter structure. Take a step backwards into simp / keyboard letters. There's no way to really tell what that character is after the G

 

He only needs to really needs to work on that B.

 

No the e and r are sketchy

 

Wonky - I disagree, I do think the R needs a tad bit more definition, but I think the E is fine.

Tempo - The wrong direction, I can't even tell if that's a F, E, or R.

Jiska - Clean, what markers are those? Only thing that bugs me, and it isn't even really a bad thing at all, I would have just left it out is the one arrow on the right side. Just not my flavor is all.

 

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tempo use bars

 

OTR 830,840,850, staedler liner0.3 and molotow 127...here is something new i did today at work