s33on3 olisten to norf, and everyone else on here. if you want to get anywhere.l

 

Crits on mine?

 

Telling you that your K doesn't fit or that your S style is wack is critique. You have to be told what is wrong to know what to improve on. People don't say this stuff without reason, It's the creative process of art. If you like your style and people dog on it here than who cares? if you are happy with your style than why get upset when people give you negative crits? If you don't want peoples advice don't post.

That's my rant for the day.

 

@ s33on - you can take the advice and crits or leave it, its up to you man! i just think its important to understand what works and what doesnt, and people on the internet are real quick to tell you what doesnt. on the flip side, the better you get the more people will notice.

@ sadg - i'm digging the style on the second pic a lot, but on the R tighten up those arrows if you want to use em. on the bottom right its noticable that it will never come to a true point, work on making sure if it will be an arrow that it could potentially connect - even if its off the page.

 

Maybe one day you'll understand why

 

just screwing around, i really like the E, if any of this looks bit let me know, first attempt at a sketch, also i know nothing really matches style wise

 

Just messin around a bit kind of shitty, but a sketch none theless. @CRED thanks for the crits on my last one. what did you mean about the baseline or whatever (NEUS by the way) View attachment 621870

 

@Neus no problem. When you do your sketch start by taking a straight edge and drawing a line and make your letters sit on it, it helps a good bit. and thicken up them bars!

 

Thanks man. Im gonna try that heres another I just did before I read that lol ignore the circles under the s I dont know what the fuck I was doin

 

oops here it is View attachment 621872

 

^^^ s' doesnt fit with the rest and the weird black cloud is pretty random.. keep drawing man ull get it

 

my entry for the round robin

BS Tape battle by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

for da tourney.
bout to get shit on.

 

Graff J up, If you think of the left side of that lime green A as a P, that would be a sick P.
And seder, you make your 3d too big
Robin junk:

 

eh, i guess

 

Didn't have any supplies so I just used CS3 and my tablet. I really fucking hate that A but I cant figure out what I want to do with it.
Open as fuck to crits.

 

bump for crits

 

@Dank badass as always. Making them simps look dopee.
@Outsider I like everything except the teeth.

Lost my form a bit towards the E and D on this.. hate them but posting anyways.

 

^can seel progress already though from what u first posted to this good work