yo when can i pass in the intermediate?

 

When you don't suck!










Just kidding

 

I kid, I kid. Pretty solid simples, im assuming when you add more and get a little more intracate or some nice letter interaction? I dont know man

 

really? i still haven't got any crits

dank - thats sick, i always love ur characters. u should post something in the intermediate thread and see if it gets deleted or not, that would be the best way to tell

 

thanks bro.
crits for you dude i don't really wanna type it. so just remember bars. and heres a lil picture. you don't want your letters to look like wavy gravy noodles. if you curve the bars, make its gradual and consistent. you learn to walk before you run.
unless your superman, then you fly....

 

little e's huh... only retards do little e's

 

guess Ive gone full retard

 

you never go full retard bro

 

@dank yeah i know, i was trying to give it some "movement" but what ever. heres something i was working on today that has straight bars

 

little e's wtf is this i never knew e's came in little and big form

 

@ EWL - looks clean, proportioned.


messing around with a pen after work

 

ewl-thats good
if your going for movement, go for it like its moving left or right. slants and slight curves.

 

shiiit you aint seen a medium e befores?!

 

This 2 letter is dancing...

 

@Mild Those highlights are nice.

if using little E's is cool than consider me Miles Davis.

New markers coming tomorrow, ignore the tag i know it's shit and i'm okay with that for right now. ass.



Edit: Tried adding some depth, the silver came out weird cause my marker tip is too wide but posting anyway.

 

^looks good but you need to work on your letters more before messing with that side of things

 

Damn no one is given crits? Only thing you see here is: looks dope and that sort of stuff.
Cred - Cut the silver and do it whit that light blue it will fit together and looks doper with the darker blue.

 

Cred you sketch alot but you need to dumb down your stuff. Simpler and stop trying fancy coloring junk just focus on learning lettering and structure for right meow.