freestyle on a paper towel

 

Not to be a jackass, but I think I'm... going to keep quiet...

 

crits please..............

 

Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made

 

Finally something i can look at.

Site MIND THE CRAP NIG.

 

theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...

lolz

u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol

 

@Physh - loving how you used your bars., good shit.

Trying to keep my shit simple and cleann

 

bump..lol

and a quickie

 

sitegraff, your characters might have potential if you work on them... try to do some minimalistic simple candy style characs... like kidrobot's for example. might work out for you
as for your actual graff stuff (letters) not so much, just like a lot of peeps here, you're starting wrong. the new to graff thread might help. hanging out and lurking for crits might also help. but one thing you need to do for sure is: stop what you're doing with your letters and stop using your methods and stick around to find out how to build your letters all over again. you're gonna have to start fresh if you want to get somewhere..

Nana, welcome to the forums, hope the guys here don't scare you away with their dicks.. you gotta understand, they don't see many females around these parts so youre something new and exciting to them, that confuses them...

 

few randoms here. stop character ideas and the sketches are kinda new for me. trying to figure out colours

 

the last one is very interesting, I can definitely see something like that as a clean ass wildstyle with details, an insane color scheme, 3D and background on some nice freshly painted wall... would burn hotter than a forest fire dude..
but if you could have properly structured letters in there rather than just random shapes, it would be much better

 

thanks dude. i know my letters are fucked at times. just trying out a bunch of things. i kinda dig that third one i posted up.

 

I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.

trying to be clean and simple still

 

oh u want titties lol ill post my grandmas titties mine are off limits im married!!!

 

Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please

 

^^^ clean now add shape

 

thanks sadgeh, appreciate the crits and found the other comment funny as fuck.....

 

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something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking