Old very old but my first just want some crits cause i never paint just did it twice.
Oh yeah the fill is very very bad

 

mori- thats dope, not really feel in the top heaviness of the O though
i think it'd look better with the pink and blue reversed.

 

mori- shitty color choices, but thats alrite, its practice. not feeling the O at all, or the 3d going to the center. that might jsut be the color again though

 

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Critz? I know the m and e's are a little whack. It didn't come out exactly how I sketched it.

 

I THINK I POSTED THESE BEFORE BUT IM LOOKIN FOR SOME CRITS... NOT HATE .. just a constructive critique...would really appreciate it .. thanks...

 

Emune- second E is wack a and I don't like the pink.
Sek - that orange one by the barbaque looks real dope
Sense- looks dope but the first s is a bit small

 

It's always cool to see a homie that you helped along throwing up some dope shit.

this is legal, and it's not done by me.
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Thats hella dope man, props to your friend.

 

yeah that's cool, though why did he not add shines on the top word as well?

 

ZMANY is what I'm reading.

 

2many

 

whats going on with your 3d?

 

I was trying to make it all meet up in the center. Any ideas for next time? I'm still trying to shake off the rust.

 

work on you 3D the lines are inconsistant and and the lines inside the 3D were cleaner and followed the flow of the 3d

 

Good lookin out. I think i should've made the letters fatter too.

 

if you make them fatter aybe space em out.

 

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The angle i took this at makes the J look worse than it is, but it's still weak... Freestyle and a blunt in this beautiful weather though, twas a great day.

straight pic before the lines

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Also can anyone recommend writers with J's to inspire me? Im havin a hard time using it as a end letter.