thats not so bad, but: - a general rule for throwups is to keep all of you letters the same size, and i suggest that you observe it. - although your e is decent, it looks goofy because of the much smaller n and a. - the little point you have on the top left of all your letters looks gay, with the exception of the the e. the e looks like it has horns or some shit. -the bump on the bottom of your D (yes, i know) wouldnt look so bad if it connected with the rest of the letter word, hope this helps.
@Dane the Bottom round part of the D and the round part of the a look off. Keep workin with it. My first throwie concept, any tips for cleaning it up, want to go paint tonite.
you seem pretty gung-ho on the "sharp" edges, but it think it would look better with more curves. like so. [Broken External Image]:http://suxorz.com/i5/previewima.jpg just a suggestion. oh, and good luck not getting caught!
^ agreed. Trying to clean it up, these are all quick concept sketches so they aren't very clean. Also ignore the shite tag. That need's work and i'm well aware haha. Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?
pase - that shits awesome keep at it. i would say try to tweak the s some but your progression should be quick cred - those stickers are nice. try to make your R more noticeable
Pase: That shit is dope. I love the loseness of it. Cred: you're covering ground quick. Keep rockin. Killroy: Looking good stay up.
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