@Vers Make your lines with one flowing motion, they look like they're made of more than one motion. Straigthen them up a bit, they look shakey as fuck. That R is awful. The extension on the top of the V is wack. Your hand style at the top has potential in it's simplicity.
/has potential, the bottom of the S needs work. The O definitely needs something done with it, it's way too boring.
[Broken External Image]:http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/27.png Not sure which name I like better, I'm personally leaning towards SEGA or SEGA2 just because the 2 looks sick... I know there isn't any SEGA's in my city.
the s needs work on both throws to much dead space on the first and the second why is there a big blotch of on the s?....a needs more definition, the first e is your most solid letter you arent far off just some little tweaks here and there .
peon drop the shine shit and your letters are boxy as hell do a little research on throws look at tons and write your name tons of times ...it will get better with effort ps. idk what it is suppose to say
@Fadr use lines or dots or whatever to show where the holes in the letters are. Trying to simplify my shitt
You might have already seen this but i would love some crits! hipster- thats nice man although the first H is a little too covered...thats really the only thing i can point out. cred-for now, REALLY dumb it down, like very simple letters. It will evolve overtime. fadr- Get rid off all the blobs on the top of your letters, and fix the d is looks like an O right meow. And the R could be tweaked hipe- always, always dope! Cant really point anything out besides the E might be alittle too small for the rest of the letters
mild i really like that but just pull the e back a bit more with its shading to fill it out, also, through the beginning of your piece the letters don't really lean much, and if so, its to the right, so the way the D falls to the left at the end is it a bit off, id just block it out a lil.