@dank mone's M's are fine, but yours need work.

 

never said his weren't "fine", just could be better.
and yea, what i posted wasn't an attempt at anything great...

 

shit everyone's m's "could be better".

 

you know what i mean you fuckin douche

 

actually, i dont think i do... I like those m's, and you were extremely vague on why/how the m's could be better

 

Lol yeah I am slowly getting the M down on the throws

 

The three basic styles I've been screwing with.
The first one was a letter style that came after I just let my hand naturally draw the letters, but I still managed to get stuck on the A. Had a few ideas for the A, but they came after I took the picture.

Crits?

 

Strange

 

ok... I am horrible at throws... I've only tried a couple of times. I kinda like the direction of this one. I'm counting on some of you guys that are good with them to crit this shit. Hipe, reach, naked, brains, venom, youth, there are a few more of you but cant think of at the moment, but I'm lookin' at you kids.


edit... I know the lines are rough etc... it was more to get the idea on paper and see how it works. I'm looking more for letter form and how I might improve flow, shape, etc.

 

pics or gtfo
the end

 

sloppy as fuck :/


Picture 271 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

you get it, i like throw ups

 

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Maybe just try pointing off the bottom hook of your A, a bit.
And your last N is a bit fucked up, id shit the little feather tip in the middle of it to the beginning left side, make it somewhat resemble your other N.

 

'id shit the little feather tip" ahhahaha

 

its a k

 

Well there's your problem.

 

Its clearly a K but make the thickness much more

 

make it thicker where? the little bit at the top or the loop. I'll be fuckin' with this a bit tonight. Gimme some ideas to throw around with it.