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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    Thanks for the critique, will put it to use. Here's a closer shot of it.
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  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  3. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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    Prea that's dope. Id say go more intricate though, your homies ought to ride your ass, cause you got the paint and control to burn some shit tough. Make your 3d thicker with more cut inside it and r extensions and you should try layering complimenting colors inside your fill or 3d
     
  4. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Some nice sketches Slotr. I wanna see you play with your line weights and texture/depth.
     
  5. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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  6. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    the L Y is a bit weird. I would have had the verticle bar of the L kick out to the left more. The F is also strange just because of how u used the middle bar. U have a fair grasp on bars and shit u cant really crit much its all personal preference
     
  7. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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    and those hands are wiggity wack
    the E and K are nice though
     
  8. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    thats an R . top 2 bars are connecceted
     
  9. TastyMcNasty

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    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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  11. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  12. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  13. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    @Venom, the arrow on the M is alright, but I feel like you killed the E with the arrow in the middle. Other than that its dope mang.
     
  14. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    Why are your letters always looking like flaccid dicks arranged in the shapes of letters? the only good one you have is the M. that effect is dope though, the fill is nice, good color scheme, and it looks pretty clean.
     
  15. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    dude รด_o you got issues and/or bad experiences involving flacid dicks... see a doctor, get yourself checked..do something
    but thanks for the comment
     
  16. 4menace2society0

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  17. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    yo venom that shit is way better then what u used to post up. Keep doing that shit. Keep using the bars and everything man. Good shit.

    duno if i will finish this
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  18. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    yo venom . that fill is very nice man . damn . i like how u (just guessing) dusted white lines over the fill . to create the almost glassy affect man thats hot

    @ other man damn u draw alot bro . i thought i spent alot of time with the book . damn .
    u just keep em comin hey . good work bro
     
  19. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    phat that is the best i've seen from you but your structure is still kinda wacked
     
  20. AstoK

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