Don't flood the thread with 3 posts. Don't take pics of yourself or anyone you know in front of your graff. As for your throws. Second one sucks. How did u manage too make your E soo low? Next time u outline make sure your bottoms are lined up before you fill in. After you fill step back and check it again. U got a pretty easy name. Sketch and make it look better before you bomb again Your stuff looks make
don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws. crits? I'm having a bitch of a time figuring out this M and my hand steadiness improves then turns to shit and so on and yea yaaa
^ tops ones better. Both M's are kinda big compared to other letters. I would shorten all the lines in the M. I don't like the S in the second one as much as the first. The bottom right of the second M looks weird too TAK. The second one gets way to thing. They aren't even throwups. Just the letter combo tak sucks. T is a bitch and K is a hoe.
Been kinda fuckin' with this, still working on trying to turn it into a 4 letter one liner. Wish my phone didn't take such retardedly large photos.
one liners take years to master my advice is to focus on a basic throws... or cut out some of the lines like I did in the i to z to e connection in the throw below.
Lol tak... TAKI 183, so dont write that. Kopr always looking good and dankbudz got some flava! I like the SE on the top one but you could use some tweaking with an M, definitely nice though Heres my flood of leetzor throwz I would have really liked the siren one if the S didnt make me want to puke
the gees and siren just need work on the s then they are solid. The hero is pretty cool boredom .....
looks good as usual hipe. SPY-you gotta find new letters man, u got 3 square ones and then one rounded one and ur F and T is really bad, T's in throwies should not be done in lower case unless you are a throwup king who can pull off nutty shit. keep practicing man we all start off at the bottom and work r way up, most of us at least. not saying im good, i still suck too. just keep at it. zorak- u got ur letters in the same square genre which is good but it doesnt look all that nice just like everyone else starting out. I dont like how ur C is really top heavy and that it comes out more then bottom, just needs a one line and it would look like a lower case E. practice practice practice and you will progress. These still suck and need lots of work but anyways, crits please.
The fuck do yuo mean I'll never get up anyway? I dont give a shit if other people write the same name. I'm out every night gettin up. And I like straight letter throws, not a bunch of bubble letters like everyone else in this thread
I like those E's homie, need some shaping up but its a good idea. The last one really. P needs some work too.