boost-left leg of the a looks disconnected and I'm not really feelin how the top of the e covers the middle bar. also the handy looks like it says ENAMT so fix up the l dafugg-i like the d but not really feelin the bottom bit of the e and maybe add a little more flavor to the L but overall not bad at all no fill on this one, crits appreciated my e's kinda hiding too much behind my O but I like my m and s
just finished this one, did the whole thing in bars first and i like it a lot better than freehanding it. also tried some new tags at the top of the paper. Crits? I thought the mixed colors would turn out better so if i painted this piece it would probably be a solid fill View attachment 625755
Critz por favor, I know the O is lopsided I forgot to make it larger at the top and my marker skils still be lackin but im workin on them
@Frii try to keep your bar size more consistent. and your letters are too squished. Messing with perspective
not feeling that R at all. I don't like the left* leg of it. You seem to be getting your E worked out though. That hand needs help too!
Word I think that r can be a easy fix tho cred. Like the leg on your c almost looks like it could naturally be the r's leg also jus a thought with a little tweaking..I may be off to cause idk alot on piecing.
KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.
Critz? Its not great but its the only thing I've felt like uploading recently. View attachment 625773
mild styles those all look dope, only thing i can say is maybe maybe make your E of naked abit closer to the other letters but other then that it looks cool. uknowigetup- i like your 3d shading on it, your last E seems to be bigger then the first one, but maybe thats just me, it looks like you messed up one of ur 3d bars on the M but other then those things i think looks good. just keep doing it and make it more tidy and what not hipe- that idea peter said about the O sounds cool, i like your k and the bend on the letters, maybe try to incorporate those curves you have on the P and R on top your K somehow. the O is kinda big but Os just r a pain in the ass, overall it looks good and clean
Thanks all and yeah the KE is always hard to work out, but I'm gonna try. And i had to color the gees cuz he left...my brain pretty much died trying to keep up with his blueprints im not ready for complex hahaha