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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    ill pm your exchange in a day or some with some crits on yours, dafuug
     
  2. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    characters are mine rest is my boy
    IMG00091-20110912-1824.jpg IMG00090-20110912-1824.jpg 51.jpg 607.jpg 852.jpg
     
  3. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
    Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.
     
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  4. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better
     
  5. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.
     
  6. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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  7. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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  8. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

    tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

    no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
     
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  10. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    thanks what u think of the letters?
     
  11. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

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    it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
    before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

    Sep 2010
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    April 2012
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  12. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    that grand theft auto page is so nice though, i like that
     
  13. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol
     
  14. Friidom

    Friidom Senior Member

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    no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r
     
  15. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more pictures
     
  16. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now
     
  17. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.
     
  18. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    shit ****** you just went full on retard. never go full on retard.

    and no-sleep, atta be.
     
  19. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress. Photo0056.jpg Photo0057.jpg
     
  20. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    i like the set of E's in the first one