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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. DRIG

    DRIG Member

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    ...theres a reason we post in the toy thread...
     
  2. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    dank them lines are crisp as fuck man props looks good and always dig your 3d ... neer yea got a little sketchy on that o but yeah guess I will start experimenting more with tilts,curves minor tweaks thanks man
     
  3. Kaze

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    Rask thats dope, dont really dig the S though and maybe give the bottom of your K the same bend as your R before it kicks out as it does
    Bigfaggot, the last E looks alittle to fat in the middle but i like u N alot. hole thing looks dope
    kopr- looks good, the 3d looks off and the bottom of your K and inside your O but other then that it looks clean, like bigfaggot said maybe start tweaking ur letters abit.
    seldom- cant even give crits on that...looks good
     
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  4. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    damn dank, killed mine haha. some one could give you piece of shit letters to work with, once you add the 3d it looks good haha.
     
  5. Mildstyles

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    OH MY GOD NEER NICE N
    Dont want to waste the time microsoft painting the background so you all get to see some super sweet interiorzz and glassez
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  6. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    i cant tell if thats a "it looks like my N joke" or not...
     
  7. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    hahaha it is, just look at that break at the bottom left leg... shatters my heart

    just kidding, not the whole N just the little part i pointed out haha
     
  8. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    well good, i almost left that out cuz i thought it looked stupid.
     
  9. MTK

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    Flickr_2012_05_05_07_17_29.jpg sorry it is big cant resize it on my phone.... Auste batlle pic didnt send right i guess... crits are welcome. I like the T :D
     
  10. GpersKreepers

    GpersKreepers Senior Member

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    mtk - its obvious you can draw, but some of those bars are off, like the bottom of the U, the hidden S is massive compared, and the two main down bars of your A aint parallel, think you need to take that style back a few steps personally,

    Mildstyles - only thing i might say about that is maybe the K looks a little squashed compared to the N and the D, no? just me then...

    writing this made me realize i dont know how to spell parallel, i had to google it, ha
     
  11. kwu

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    rask neer kopr n dank doin it right lol everything else is gonna make me cry
     
  12. Mildstyles

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  13. cred1384

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    Yeah but they are tears of joy.
     
  14. H1P30N3R

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    the k to o is wack maybe a lil too much bending and tweaking... thoughts crits please

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  15. Mori

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  16. pover

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    Ok I didn't know how to express it so I drew it for ya, hell yeah! Try to make the things I circled thinner.

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    Also, try something different in the holes of the P and the R.
    Besides that, pretty nice, I like the bending, and that K is neat.
     
  17. gottapaintdaily

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    thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it
     
  18. gottapaintdaily

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    another throwie done for a battle, crits?
     
  19. Mildstyles

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    Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
    Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline
     
  20. BigFaggot

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    @kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
    @gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.
     
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