I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching. Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters. Watch your bar widths no-sleep Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits
Tempo- work on the o, rest of its ok cred- the R is fucked. Try some different styles too, couldnt hurt jern- middle bar of the E is at a weird angle, bottom of the j gets too fat. decent hands MN- I like that color scheme a lot, especially in the 3d. The Y is weak, make the horizontal bar in the middle match the angle of the 4 maybe. I need to stop fucking around all the time and do some simps... oie_2974997XPw1eOG-1
i like your bevel type effect. i remember way back when i had this drawing book and it had that in there, was fun.. you hid the bottom of the S again. might as well just have it start with the line like / so it doesn't look weird. so like watch what parts of your letters you cover and how much, i tend to try not to cover more than half a bar. at most that character looks like an evil indian eskimo dr doom lady goj thats dope, got barrssssss
jern looks dope but like norfsuthr said that middle bar of the E is at a weird angle and the N seems kinda big but other then that it looks good 4eyes thats sick dude, that mask thing reminds me of the mf doom mask kind of lol norfsuthr that looks dope, only thing i would say is maybe have an opening on the right bar of ur W where it meets the middle bar
oh shit i never new that haha, the mask suited mf doom well lol...learn something new everyday didnt get many crits on this before so bumpin for crits
kaze - both look good but the 3d looks kinda weird in some parts. like in the D's and under the K crits please
thanks for the crits, yeh i dont know what to do with 3d in the D and maybe with the bottom of the K i should have had it start skinny and go fatter to the end of the bar...i just gotta get better at 3d i like yours its clean and simple with style. i like that E you did, maybe with your A you should have had it abit higher and have the legs abit longer..but i dono it looks good the way it is right now too i think. top left part of your V the 3d looks kinda off ^ haaha i meen some parts of it are not so easy to read
I like the beveled look to those letters. That's something you don't see too much. I don't like the 3d and how the vanishing point is in the center.
4eyes that dude is killer with his green hoodie, yo the letters fill is missing something maybe a blending color to add so its not such a sharp contrast from light to dark
4Eyes - fuck man i love Doc Doom looks nice and MF is mofucking dope too. On the letters looks nice but the fill must blend from dark to light. Neer - dope simp looks good
thanks man, but nah guys a blending on those would take away from the beveled effect. that 4 eyes is lookin nice, the green around looks good, but maybe pull the Y out a tad bit,the top left is kinda covered. Doc Doom loks good though.
HAA!! when i saw this i was listening to Stars, ad the chorus just repeats "so many stars". freaked me out a lil. looks nice though, you got simples down.
big fag, paint that with them same colors. looks cool. but without that red do i really just et ignored on the fact that the doctor doom look likes a robot eskimo lady?!!?!?