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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    I think it's dope. Make your K lean in more towards the center and make your S flatten out on the bottom more. You've got a nice style coming from there.

    Ps that'd be a nice train hit since its Pretty horizontal
     
  2. Kesar

    Kesar Member

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    I'm trying to stay more horizontal. I think the loop on the R doesn't really look correct. Something seems wrong about it.

    Thanks for the Crits.
     
  3. Bas

    Bas Senior Member

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    Thanks guys.
     
  4. KroeGHK

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  5. 6i9o

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  6. GpersKreepers

    GpersKreepers Senior Member

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    ^that, keep doing words like that, focus on keeping your bars the same width and i notice you dont sketch your pencil lines, keep that stuff up and you'll see much faster progression
     
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  7. 6i9o

    6i9o Senior Member

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    Ok so the upper left leg of the S is small, left legs on the C are too small, the R's bars are really off, and the last S look like a B :(
    Other than that, crits?
     
  8. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    The NOK yes... this no... rounded letters are tough when you're doing straights, but it's good for you. try going more basic.
     
  9. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Fixed... really you need to start doing stuff like this. Stop what youre doing.
    computer drawing...not easy
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  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    fuck kroe those are sick, good work dude

    6i9o the NOK is good keep doing stuff like that , the one below is not good though

    kesar thats dope
     
  11. 6i9o

    6i9o Senior Member

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    Tried doing simple curves...
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    better, try to keep all ur letters the same size though and i know S's can be a pain in the ass to draw out, just look at the S on ur keyboard and try ur best to draw that out...thats wat i do
     
  13. Kesar

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    6i90 - S's are kinda hard. Once you get use to them they are fun though.

    Testing mo shit, for tha chatter.

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  14. KroeGHK

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  16. 6i9o

    6i9o Senior Member

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    The middle one, the G doesnt look like a G to me.
     
  17. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Gopher: The top two are solid. The second one is an interesting style. The F on the last one is a bit rough. Your cracks and such are pretty good. The top bar of the F imo should not have the chunk on it and be the same width of the vertical bar. The bottom bar of the F (also imo) should be straight you can keep it the same width, but I would suggest something like how Seldom does the middle part of his E from time to time.
     
  18. 6i9o

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    So i spent a lot of time making sure they were all the same size width wise (except the T)
     
  19. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Kesar looks good but fix the left bar of the K i dont think the bend works that well. bottom of the S is sorta awkward too, and fix the middle of the E where the bars meet, i think its too skinny. not bad
    and omg stop^^^ especially if youre doing a name like demi levato...jesus
    Any crits on mine? all i got so far cuz i dont wanna ruin it with the other 2 letters until later...new style
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  20. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Go for the other two on a separate piece of paper. Then add them in once you got them down.