the l I admit was an intenional bite the s wasn't intentional but I do like the ny style alot so it may be an influence. anyway omiz stop with the pointy bottoms I went through that phase myself. matt Im not even sure what that says looks like hccne anyway keep working at it man all the add ons are unneeded right now and the loopy letters I wouldnt do that either .
^The E you didn't use right above the E you did use is far better than the one you did use. IMO the both bottom portions of your H and M should be more uniform.
Well man youre entitled to your opinion, but still, i like my stuff, and hey im not tryna do shit like everyone elses, i dont look on the net for ideas at all when im tryna come up with something, i just sit and throw shit out onto paper and see what i think looks good, i do think that my 'S' needs a bit of beefing up but personally i think the 'N' is fine....im sure over time my letters will improve but for now i think theyre ok...and hey, its graffiti man, i dont do it for approval, i do it cos i cant afford drugs anymore.
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Phat it looks good, but that p does look like a 9.... a dope 9 and the 2 does look like a Z too. MN Nice. maybe try an E like this. I'm not digging that one at all. how is this?