Your bars are all kinda outa shape, mainly the r with the different sizes like that, I'd say try doing some keyboard letters so You get the grasp of bars and letter positioning and what not
I have done keyboard letters but that time i wanted to do some weird shit. some letters are diffrent size so i have to work on that.
Hey Bruce keep working on keepin that structure with each letter and gettin it all flowin together but you comin out with some cool shit it's just still a touch off man
That P looks too plain for the rest of the word bruh. Keep it up tho the style is coming along. You ever gonna get off that graph paper tho? Your not gonna have guide lines on a wall lol
You dont wanna be using BLAZE as your name trust me. It makes you look stuepid. Your tag doesnt have to be oneliner. Also dont do all those arrow things to your pieces and work with yuor letterstructure.
Sick stuff Loon, and yeah i wasn't feeling the P either, got lazy. I just have a selfish preference in width, its eye candy to me. That's why i do graph, i know i don't progress, but it's fun.
Looking good @Loon but the L to O connection on the right one looks weird, otherwise good shit. @Bruce your starting to get the hang of it, just keep at it @zoup Im still unsure about your style but like a lot of people have said you just need to perfect it/ do something truly great with it, peace
Seeing as I haven't posted a piece on the forum in a while here's what I've done the past couple of weeks All say 'MIUNZ' open to crits/ opinions
Minuz your pieces are fucken sick, i really like the third one down with the gold, yellow and silver. And the bottom pieces looks trill and the one before where you fill the page. Great width and flow with the bars man. Just a quickie.