Nah cred i say dumb it down a bit. I think you jumped the gun and went for a lot of things to happen at once.
@Romero i like it, maybe try it with thicker bars too? @Mild i hear ya but i figure why not try every once in awhile. I gave it one more go but i'ma tone it down next time. @Mike and Mild thanks for the crits, much appreciation as alwayss. the more i look at this damn E the weirder it looks to me...
Sadgeh I love the colours, and im a sucker for anything with crosshairs but im really not digging the E otherwise its good.
I concur. I do that shit a lot with pen freestyles. It's good to do every once in a while, because even if you do it shitty, you get an idea in your head for a letter or letters. In 5 years that shit could come back and inspire you to do something dope as hell. I mean personally Cred, I never ever would've thought to bend/kink a C like that, it's just not how I think. But more simple my friend, you'll progress in time. Lyfer we always get on at the same time... but the top of your A is wack, to pointy looks weird and shit. B feels a little to short, and the S is good but it resembles a 5 too much imo. That character is SO nice though...what was his name again :/
Oi, sorry if I've offended you somehow looking for critiques. That was very constructive. Thank you DKODE, keep working that dirty throwie you got goin' on your flickr. Cheers to everyone who had crits, I'll keep working on it. I'll post some handstyles later this week
much better than the last. i see you took my advice bout the points. now try and et your letter thickness the same all the way through. nice improvement tho JAE
thanks ^ ..and yeh i did take ur advice on the points- looks much better being uniform... and yeh -the A looks thinner then both the other lettrs...