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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

    REAL_LYFE_MIKE Banned

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    lmao
     
  2. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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  3. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

    REAL_LYFE_MIKE Banned

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    make the C and E match more. even out the 3d and your straight
     
  4. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Nah cred i say dumb it down a bit. I think you jumped the gun and went for a lot of things to happen at once.
     
  5. ..romero..

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  6. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Romero i like it, maybe try it with thicker bars too?

    @Mild i hear ya but i figure why not try every once in awhile. I gave it one more go but i'ma tone it down next time.
    @Mike and Mild thanks for the crits, much appreciation as alwayss.

    the more i look at this damn E the weirder it looks to me...

    ai1051.photobucket.com_albums_s424_cred1384_preview_image_1_96418052x.jpg
     
  7. omiz

    omiz Senior Member

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    favorite piece by you so far.
    the d looks kinda plain with the rest though.
    i actually like the e
     
  8. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    legs RR.jpg

    For the round robin not amused about it because i gotta rush it
     
  9. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    Romero i have an M in my name and can never work with it help a nukka out
     
  10. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

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    try one with taller letters but same style. i would define the letters more. just a thought
     
  11. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

    REAL_LYFE_MIKE Banned

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    for a rush it still aint bad. I ve seen alot worse on well time taken.
     
  12. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    Sadgeh I love the colours, and im a sucker for anything with crosshairs but im really not digging the E otherwise its good.
     
  13. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

    REAL_LYFE_MIKE Banned

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    Bump for crits
     
  14. Shit Outta Luck

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    I concur. I do that shit a lot with pen freestyles. It's good to do every once in a while, because even if you do it shitty, you get an idea in your head for a letter or letters. In 5 years that shit could come back and inspire you to do something dope as hell. I mean personally Cred, I never ever would've thought to bend/kink a C like that, it's just not how I think.

    But more simple my friend, you'll progress in time.

    Lyfer we always get on at the same time... but the top of your A is wack, to pointy looks weird and shit. B feels a little to short, and the S is good but it resembles a 5 too much imo. That character is SO nice though...what was his name again :/
     
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  15. ZeektheSneek

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    Oi, sorry if I've offended you somehow looking for critiques. That was very constructive. Thank you DKODE, keep working that dirty throwie you got goin' on your flickr.

    Cheers to everyone who had crits, I'll keep working on it. I'll post some handstyles later this week
     
  16. RaWs3kz

    RaWs3kz Senior Member

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  17. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

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    much better than the last. i see you took my advice bout the points. now try and et your letter thickness the same all the way through. nice improvement tho JAE
     
  18. RaWs3kz

    RaWs3kz Senior Member

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    thanks ^ ..and yeh i did take ur advice on the points- looks much better being uniform... and yeh -the A looks thinner then both the other lettrs...
     
  19. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Simple.
    What some kids in this thread should be doing
    simples.jpg
     
  20. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    More like everyone in this thread including myself!