I dig it fuke xcept for the K and the u is good but could be better Try not having the bottom so stretched out and bring the top left out more
Fuke, you missed over 3 spots of 3-d on the E of the second peice. So dont listen to Zook. The lines are inconsistently set and the shading is off, so that throws off the 3-d even more. Its not too eratic, but those are just the small things that if they look right can bring everything together better. Also your outlines are fine. Id say good on the second one. Well spaced and clean.
clout where are u counting 3 spots? i only see one small spot and its at the bottom of the vertical bar, and the direction the 3d goes its debatable if it should even be there... biggest problem with the 3d is on the bottom of the K :-/ .... the middle bar on the E of the FIRST piece is the one thats missing
my bad, i meant he was missin 3d on the E of the first one. and the rest of my crits were for his second one.
Wouldn't it be better for him to try to develop more then one, being a "Toy" and all? Most writers are subject to numerous name changes, and various styles in their progression. Maybe one style will become more dominant and suitable. I agree, because I think you are trying to condone consistency. But, multiple styles as a "Toy" isn't a bad thing. Unless you are just artistically retarded.. Which.. yeah.
Looks good I guess but the background pisses me, no hate, but its too distracting And the roller/straight letter with the cracks looks nice and your throwie is good too just don't make the p so box-y
sorry meph , first pic i cant find anything i actually like about it. second one the boxed meph with the 3d i like the 3d but the letters are inconsistent thicker in some areas and thinner in others. i am not a throwie kinda guy but yours arent bad aside from the p from hell
Anybody notice the similarities between Tofe and Meph's shitty letter structure sketches? This also lead me to believe Meph=Tofe. View attachment 563497 edit: Also top right.
i saw the tofe too hah... maybe tofe just told his friend about this site and now hes posting his shit too... they both have the same wildly distracting backgrounds though
seriously.. why would it matter. its 2 diff pieces so what does it hurt to play along and give crits like its a lone piece. sadly it does have the same errors as the others tho
They all suck.. Terrible letter structure, the 3D changes far too drastically, even the straight letters are inconsistent. The only good letter from the toss is the P, and that's mediocre at best.
no..no... really crust, tell us how ya really feel.. except there is a catch..try to do it without sounding like an asshole next time seriously is it that hard for some of you to treat others like actual humans? shit if half of you were treated like shit when ya were first starting tagging you would have run back to suck on your moms worn out titties. how hard is it to show a bit of tact instead of being an ass? granted it takes a few more brain cells to type out "the piece itself i didnt like much but certain letters like blah blah were ok" is it that hard to be civil or is it beyond your vocabulary