MONSTER - see how your R comes down on the right side....make your M and N do that too. idk why you stopped them so high, bring them down like all the other letters.

LYFE2 - You don't have to change your name. just dont paint public spots, sketch a lot more.

crits plz?

 

ZIRE. take the point out of the top left of the Z and make the R more round

 

Lyfe yea u picked a difficult name lolz. Idk ive been dazd but for throwies it works better wit da e so idk if i should keep da e or no lol

 

zaro-i would just do regular bubble letters, and get solid ones down. all the weird shit going on, such as the thing on the Z, are unnecessary right now
depo-it's pretty decent, definately clean. i would change the E though so it doesn't look too much like the P, and maybe make the O not wavy looking, that's just me though

new throwie, this one's super fucking sloppy, but it'll hopefully get better the more i paint it. crits?
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hey bro very nice...i tried the thowie u sent me i still need alot more practice but what u think?

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crits plz

 

i call a bite on this one. no beef or anything, you look like you've got some good can control and you could probably do some dope stuff, but this has gotta be a bite.

 

indeed.

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lmao..the funny thing is that i just found out about this particular thread..i was posting on 12oz previously never here..so please..stop..

 

so you're admitting it's a bite?

 

Here one of my new ones, fixed the tops of the letters, there now sharper not flat...

 

first ever attempt at a throw. be nice.

 

MADE - it's really not too bad. i would just try and make the D look a litttttle bit more like a d. maybe make it rounder at the bottom. thanks for the crits.

SNEAK - keep sketching duder

ITO or whatever - i'll back and say, it's not tooooo much of a bite. BUMP HATER! <3

DOKER? - the D and O are pretty nice. the ker doesn't fit. make the rest of the letters round at the bottom like they are.

 

ahaha why/how would he bite io

thats funny.

 

cos the i is the same

 

only so many ways you can do an I

 

am i admitting?? what are u a tard..it means i never seen that in my life...and there is only a couple ways to do an i..and wen i finally found one that werks...this dickface had to try and hate..its funny cause u prolly just suck is all...call bittes to make u feel better.lmao

 

oh and its ico kids i c o --->_ l

 

Lawlcat, dispite your name im gonna give you crits.....just because that throw is fucking good for a begginer one....no beef..but i fucking hate your name (user name)