the flower and background are fine but the arrows are uneccessary and ridiculous. ruins the whole thing for me.
Yea I dont really like that either, but wanted to make sure I fit the K on the page and couldnt make it fit a better way that looked good. didnt feel like erasing the entire thing. o well I decided to add 3d and a little color... View attachment 575841
ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice
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nothing has really changed while i have been gone, no one is really improving. weakfingers and aspek are the only good ones.
Sorry. Didn't mean to rant/insult like I did. But still, just fucks me off to see writers throwing away really good advice because they think they're much better than they are. You're right, I don't NEED to like it. But if Loki is hoping to get real props from anyone on this site, she should probably at least be a bit more respectful about the help people are trying to give her. By all means Loki, do what you want, dare to be different. But above all, aim to improve by any means necessary; even if you have to 'conform' a little bit for now.
Flipping chickens, pics 2 & 4 are good, keep working with that style. Redux, I'm digging the backwards R on the throws and the pen piece at the bottom is ill but it seems like your X isn't quite going with the style of the piece. First sketches in more than a few months, trying to get my steez back. View attachment 575924 View attachment 575925 Edit- Isn't it still "Give crits to get crits"?
it's awesome when u have a dad who makes over 10k per painting hey check out what's just chillin in my hallway this painting got picked out of like 800 other bay area artists to be in a figure contest, unfortunatly he didn't win.
Baron- i think if u even out the bars on the first one it'll look sick. View attachment 575963 i know the coloring isnt that good, please leave crits anyways