Knowledge, much the same as everyone else but it's clean as fuck and all looks good apart from that extension on the S. Dank, i don't like the top of the R and the I looks too static. try to give it some movement Gemer, the K and W are alright but then it gets a bit squashed together. not bad though. can i get some worth while crits on this?
Some crits would be nice. Tempo - concistent letters, but its becoming boring just add some more style.
tempo - not feeling the little leg on the bottom right of the middle letter (A)? [Broken External Image]:http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005.jpg can i get some crits please?
take your time a bit more with the lines, just to neaten them up. and work on that handy a bit. keep it up though. i reckon your heading in the right direction Temp - lose that kick on the right side of the A
cheers man, i cant seem to find a pencil anywhere so thats part of the reason for the messiness. i just sketched it out with a paint pen then filled it haha.
not bad for a simple just start making ur lines a bit straighter and cleaner and ull have a nice simple flowing
Sake: You're working in the right direction. Work on bar consistency (example: the legs and cross portion on the A and K). Your SAK leans (lmao that gave me a chuckle) to the left while your E stands straight up. It draws away from the flow of the piece.
Tempo: your other style is way better than this mess. The line through the middle just looks bad imo. Work with this style without the bar through the middle and try and get it flowing a little better.
heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_123199693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you ~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~ o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good..... [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG
WTF spilt ink u bitch you steel my piece i drew that i hate it when people take credit for work that is not theirs oh i caould have some crits