norfsuthr, I could say the same to your 3... or is it an e?
u gotta do something about it if it's an e

 

Well it's a 3 and actually looks like one so im not worried about it

 

gettin tired of straight letters, is this any good for my first attempt at bubbles?
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^yo! letter structure, size, and bars still apply to throws, u should definetly start with making j one peice instead of a bar and a circle next to eacother, same with the e the s and the r, because it looks terrible. only thing that that aint complete shit is the T and even the bars on that is crooked.

 

better keep rockin straight letters and go from there then eh? or just try again?

 

nah if u aint try other shit then how use gone get better at it? keep sketchin a throw and post it back and some1 will help u tell ur shit turns out better

 

This is dank. Make it clean as fuck with a thick drop shadow.

 

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green one is sloppy, pink is alright, not too much experience with throwies, so any help is appreciated

 

no actually bars dont apply to throws....

 

go with the pink N, but all the other green letters look better. try not to do so much over lapping.

Thanks phil. I still wasnt satisfied so I made a few changes. crits? I'm feeling insecure about having a lowercase R and capital D.
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I'm feelin the capital R alot more than the lowercase, that may just be me though

 

still learning...... crits/ pointers ?

 

mor o' dis

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shit looks nice

 

R > r, bro

 

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norfsuthr thats a D? im not liking that backwards E either. i mean your style isnt too bad and your lines are clean but your letters need to be more simple

 

turns out it's actually a 3, not an e
i still think it's misleading though :S

 

Thanks everyone, will work on it.
Also phat, I'm not really sure how to make it look more like a 3. I could put # inside it everytime, or roman numerals?