gam- use bars, and cover up some white space, and lurk some threads to get leter structure inspiration keep it simple though
dude that is raw seriously... don't post in this thread lmao... that is pretty tight. I suck with simples. >.>! P.s. any bay writers in sj pm me.
Tag, feedback please! Ok, so I've worked on it for a while, I think this is an improvement...but ill see what you guys have to say...
suparjafar: yeah, thats what i did for the past like hour haha....ok, so basicly your sayin that my letters should be an equal size to make this look better? And as for the style, whats making it look like, well there isnt any? (in your opinion)
for now, yeah and i really dont get the second part..lol but im gonna guess you mean developing a handstyle..you just gotta keep practicing and writing it over and over and it'll start to tweak over time and just keep writing it and you'll develop a style i dont know how to explain it
I dont know too much about handstyles, but yours is decent. The A doesnt look too much like an A rather than a N. try to point the top of it more. Also the Arrow on the left is totally unnecessary.
ok...heres what i got... After litterly 4 double sided pages of writing my name, i think i got the tag down...correct me if im wrong
test FUCK TITS SHIT HELL CUNT FAG WHORE SLUT FUCKER end test conclusion: i dont get BBV's post at all. snaw: looks good (left especially) keep those simps up. use uppercase N. dont let the curls of the S touch its middle. and the W in second is too bubbly compared to rest and use bars. actually. let them overlap instead of guessing where they should meet krump. your getting the idea. straighter letters fathem - no arrows, no unattached mid E line, no attached A to F, have Cross bar for A, have consistent height + width pls, and straighter simpler letters for now. and dont use your sketch pad for tag practice (if that is what it is) and for the love of allah dont put that in the street
dawg, YOU AREN'T CHANGING ANYTHING. letters made of arrows = WHACK. letters made from parts of other letters = WHACK. letters that are smaller than other letters = WHACK.
well fuck, i got four different ppl sayin four differnt things...you say no arrows someone else says improve a letter and its good...i cant fucking please everyone, and besides in the end its my tag.
took me way to long to edit. fuck. read previous post for crit shit ^^ fathem. much better already. remove curl top of F mid of F top of E. keep letters in straight line like VAGINA below. gotta wet dream before you fuck. Iffff yo know what i mean. yeh gotta marry before you abuse you spouse.....if ya see where im going.