Best thing I've seen today hahaha
hope it makes it....

 

Tasty - The way you leave your bars intact without erasing them gives me a headache on some of them, the bars are fine but I just wonder if erasing a little would help.

Sore - I like the throw, the R is messed up but all in all I think it is alright. On your piece I don't like how you overlapped the letters, it just doesn't look natural or normal. space the letters out more.

 

sore - keep at it. your doing everything right. you might want to take a look at tastymcnasty if you want to start developing your bars.

tasty mc nasty - whats up with some colors? rack up some sharpies if you need to. shits clean

 

keyboard letters, bro.

 

Just started this one

thinking of a pink fill. Blue force

 

try keyboard letters. i can't even read that.

 

female - looks like it says sone. add some more style to it. that bomb is simple. make a new one if you are trying to be serious

 

Alright ima finish it and do another one with your advice

 

Sure you fucking can get some crits. What does it say anyway? Soar? and the 2nd to last one I can't quite follow SHHDE? The S's are alright Can't say Im digging the whole bowling ball cube thing that is the "O" the extension on the "A" messes with me but the one on the "R" is alright all in all its pretty good just not digging the overall flow. Try fading your 3d into nothing " erase the back of it so it fades into the background. Just came to me it most likely will look good on your piece.

 

@FuckTheFame Do you want me to style all the letters?

 

Tasty- Doesn't flow, try sharpening up some of your bars
Sore- Same letters everytime, I've seen no progression
Youth- Diggin the 3d

 

@female - have some flair. but remember that less is more when your still new

 

cant wait to get this keyboard letter thing on point. I'll keep trying an one of these days it will get there.

 

^ the only reason people are telling you to do keyboard letters is so you can get down letter structure, its not bad to experiment its actually good.
My crits are to bring your letters closer and add a 3D or something

 

ok sick i tried.

 

i tried to make it simpler and have the letters more clearly look like the intended letters.input?

 

1:Gast
2:Gast
3:Gast
4:Gast
5:Late, Gast, Zerg, Break
6:Shut
7ld man

 

This whole page sucks.



A piece i did on my homie werm's desk

 

Isaac - should try doing straigher letters
SHUT - there nice but i'd keep them simpler imo
Gatsoi - id say they all look really nice and clean apart from the one with an eye in the e which i aint feeling