that looks good man, just needs to be cleaned up. focus on making it even, uniform hight all the way over. and try to keep the lumps the same curve
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your shadows/3d are all over the place. clean that up and those drips dont look smooth at all. focus on your letters first before tryin to knock out all the little extras around it. hit the black book for a while. congrats on gettin up but get your pieces polished home before you bust em out in public.
Note-Vomit. Rak-Stop doing so much fancy shit, Like Whats up with the Urine background man? Your shadow is fucked, MORE SIMPLE!!!! Oh ya, and pick a fucking name haha. Bogus-Don't bother with the whole "One line" Shit right now, Like your hand style AND your throw are all one lined.. Shit looks FUCKED UP man. Why do three colours dude? Like get shit down before you go all "fancy". Even though that don't look fancy at all.
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haha ya ill hold off on the details but whats wrong with the shadow? and hows the letter structure? Blox- I dont like the A or the N but I really like the E and the I and the L is nice too
are you trying to bite an 'A' from answer? lol? F- make the bottom of the F less of just a circle, it looks fucking stupid, remember when you do a bar... its a BAR. I'm not saying it has to be a rectangle. It's just not correct to put it in the middle of the bottom of the letter as you did, try moving it to the left, it will still look ugly though, just less. it looks like a fucking puzzle piece or some shit R- looks wayyyy better, keep playing around with it though, when you get better, your letters were make their own shape in throwies, don't even sketch, because when you're on paper, just try flowing. Just random shapes or some shit(nothing too ridiculous obviously) ALSO: Make your bars same size. the left of it looks skinnier than right. if you want to do the steez of the right looking bigger, make sure to bring it back, or just make a circle and play around with it at the bottom of the bar. as I said for the A... is that a bite from answer? lulz? It's on paper though, either way, the A doesn't go with the rest of the letters. Bite a new one. make the N more DEFINED as an N... specifically the fact that it's lowercase. that little part where you brought it back into the n(the half circle on the left), try making that go straight up, and not towards the right. You knawww I mean?