Xist, that would look really dope on a wall with a crazy multi-colored background and then that painted over it, hollow. And remember there's an apostrophe in "we're."

 

all my markers are dying so i'm being forced to do color schemes like this so i don't use a whole lot of any one colour. need to go rack.

 

why else would you be on here if you weren't putting effort into it,
it looks good, color it.


any things i should fix on the letters?

 

Ewal: not bad, but you gotta watch your kerning bro

Ace: the Basoe looks good although im not a fan of the fill. The Poker id say all the letters need work.

Shroomsh: that shit looks mad dope, now go colour it or paint. it would look sick.

Mc Satan: that squid character looks pretty dope although as said before the word itself is too small.

Aaesoo: doesnt look too bad but you gotta fix the 3D and work a little more on the letters, overall not bad tho.

Rezume: shit looks dope, the character in the background looks insane although its hard to see. id try to work more on the "Z" and i wouldnt connect that extension of the "U" with the "E"

Here's a sketch i did, theres lots of things wrong with it and i messed up a couple of times too. im not really satisfied with the "Z" cuz it looks too much like a 2.


trying new things by JokzOner, on Flickr

crits please!!! anything helps

 

crappy photoshop coloring job untill i can get some colors

 

@rasm, ay, thats what i was thinking keep it hollow with a shadow of the lines, and i know that theres ment to be a ' in were, hell forgot to put it in D:

 

for mcsatan, cause i felt like it:
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finally getting around to finishing this off:
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your style is um... interesting...

 

hahaha good or bad interesting? also, i showed a similar peice to a nurse in a psych ward i spent some time in a few years back and she said the exact same thing. hahaha.

 

messer, you the fucked up kind of emo
this shit blows as graff

 

thanks for the writing allthough not sure how that would work out as graff. also your anatomy is a bit off. i like gore but there are no guts in tits which is what it looks like you drew coming out of it. also that woman sure has some child bearing hips on her

 

Ewal- i think the end of the l is a needs to be a bit longer as teh rest of the letters look a bit wider but its clean yo!
ace- that basoe i likes, the arrow colour change bit works well
Shroom-tiiight!
aeso- think you could do a bit more with the 3d bit to bland for my liking
jokz- liking most the stuff your posting up
Rezume- i like everything on that except the gaps on the m
messer- you draw fucked up shit there buddy i like it my brain thinks like that too lol it kinda scares me sometimes tho lol
but i think if you get your actually people drawing skills tighter that fucked up imagery could be freaking dope in the background of a piece or as a character etc
Mcsatan-i like the squid, think satan would work better than the Mc but i'm not guna start that argument again, just my honest opinion
again will try to sit down n draw some shit up for ya'll to crit me on taa'

 

hahaha thanks bro, i just like gore.

edit: pshhhh emo can smd.

 

do you watch alot of guro??

 

allrite just posting up a lil sketch,gonna ink it and color it in a bit.trying out these new watercolor pencils.

 

some old, some new


sketchmania by JokzOner, on Flickr

old sketch by JokzOner, on Flickr

old outline, new colours by JokzOner, on Flickr

crits please

 

i like the horned jokz and the middle one although the K looks a bit odd to me

 

yea the "K" on both those sketches sucks.

 

Mc Satan - wow that is a huge improvement since the last thing u put up, keep up the good work

Jokz - the one with the antlers is cool, but like mc satan said ur K's are weird, the best K u have is on the one below the antler piece