should have made those letter connecting extensions thinner than the normal bars. Cause right now that is hard to read, all I see are a bunch of w's, an O and an R

 

yeah i thought that too.. i'll maybe do another one... but better..

 

a quick sketch...crits please
the word is CRAK

 

no.

 

only fat joe is worthy of writing crack

 

and some ideas to improve it??
i know it looks shitty as hell but i dont know where to start..what to remove what to keep what to change etc...thank you

 

Quicky that was rushed as fuck, very sloppy. Bad overall. Just for some talk.

 

Eanr some shit is realllly banging some shit is well horrible hahah what word do you actually write?

 

ight since not enough people go to the exchange thread anybody wanna exchange.(i write slotr)

 

Poke

 

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though I would fix up that E.

 

says poke? yo id take a sharpie or something to that outline and beefin it up. would make it look better, and then id be able to tell witch extensions work and witch dont... cause right now a lot of em aint lookin to hot...

pen freebie

 

i used a sharpie out line pen

 

take something bolder

 

i do sometimes i dunno i just prefer the thin line to a thick one in my sketches flcik any way

 

simplicity is best, so just basic keyboard letters, then go from there.

3omo, either quit graffiti or start over, because whatever that is, it is not working at all.

oh ya, dope stuff dave and reach

 

that one looks good, but the one before would do wonders with a broader outline