humr that first ones tight except for the R, it looks like down syndrome, and the left extens on the M, and that 3rd flick i dont feel at all oats is aight nice and simple, i wouldnt vote for it in a battle though hapa- idk what im looking at those skinny bars connecting everything should go away kryl- keep practicing i guess, nothing really stands out crit me yall, this is going on a prodo on saturday, pics later i screwed up the 3d width in some parts, i know
In my opinion, I think you should cut some negative space in your D and straighten out your T to flow with the rest of your letters. Interesting style though.
basically what I mean by that is when your looking at a spot and you see what your gonna write in your head, trying to picture it before comming out with the cans, does math come apart of what goes in to when your peice.
yeah i feel you on the T, i feel like it has to have the bend though for it to flow, but ya it is weird looking, thansk though. i learned i cant really do traditional piecing styles, so imma fuck with this for a while
Just a suggestion for the T maybe, Make it capital and have extensions on both sides coming down from the top bar that curve out. Like on the top of your DEB, when you change directions, the bars flush out so maybe it could make the T more uniform. I feel as though I might have fucked up my thought but maybe not lol
Just tried some guys name I saw up. K is a little small but the whole thing is kinda small so that's probably why.
looking better? Picture 128 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr Picture 129 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr Picture 127 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr Picture 130 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr tried to come up with a one liner Picture 131 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
Sol - i like it, but the bottom bar of the E could have been smoother and i would have connected the two parts of the K did this yesterday, i dont really like my E or W but i think the rest turned out ok crits please
playing with ideas for an exchange. Just started doodling with a purple paint marker and liked it so I outlined in sharpie.