I looked through your post and saw that you used to be bulimic, which is more prevalent in females, so i made an assumption. My bad.
bump from the bottom crits? boss simple out ur letter try to give them the same tilt same spacing maybe make ur letters fatter
try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider... example: View attachment 585568
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astro:1st one is garbage 2nd one has some flow to about the t that looks likes a y try to get ur bars same width ur t only has sharp angles not much round on it as opposed to the other letters
Stigma- I take it that says atone? if so here are my thoughts... The overall sense of flow is good, it seems symetric. But I think the structure is lacking. The middle bar of the A is too much make it smaller and not overlapping the right bar of the A. I don't get why there is like a middle horizontal bar thing in the middle of your T, thats wack. The bar in the middle of the O is...not cool. Middle bar of the E is wack too. Take your time clean up things, its just overall sloppy. But hey its a cool idea, rework it.
crits.id give them but i cant see anypics.i assume if i did i would tell you to keep practicing.because thats all i can say. -meko.yours is the only one i can see.keep doin what your doin.shit looks dope. just fucking around while coughin up a lung.