Need some crits on this shit

 

i wouldn't put the donut style o in there.
i'd do somthing like a | or $ or something. the O just doesn't fit.
that's just my thought.

 

thanx omiz!

 

yo ZIK i agree with Omiz bout the middle or ur O, and maybe have the middle part of ur R come up a little higher and give it some more definition or somthing, or try a lowercase R it would look sick too. i dig that tag too man looking good

 

simple throw but did it as big as i could

 

omg bro thats a straight burner throw!!!! holy shit you looks so gangsaterz in that picz tooQ!!!Q!!Q!Q!Q!!! And those tags you put inside the lettorz omg, make it even betters! ITs like, noew evey1 can noe what crew your in!!!! Its probably gantaaerstercrewoner!!! Yall dont want to mess with this deer legged nigguh from ohio!!! LMAO

 

ya we all wish we could be as gangsta as u DOG livn the idaho thug life come to cleveland bitch n ill show u whats up if you can take your horse and buggy that far LMFAO wheres all ur pic of your bad ass burnners or of anything u got none !! u afriad old farmer john might shoot you tryn to tag his barn ?

 

Hahaha. Lost it right here.

looking for crits on a newish two letter.

 

very bottom of the E feels a little thin to me

 

Mues that 4 is flavor but I think you need to fix the way the way the e kicks out, play around wih the e

 

Finally some style to your throws. Comes naturally once you paint enough, huh? Just completely scrap the flat and pointed tops.

 

come see me in a piece battle then. you pick the word, and have it posted up by 3 o clock. if you dont respond to this by 2, then tthe battle is off, I got potatoes to farm

 

lost it at the deer leg comment, 4eyes looking good, dig the 4 more than the E though, fake that bottom one is sick.

just some typical shit, should hit the books more ive just been super lazy

 

that looks fresh mn.
a thought i had was maybe make the letters almost symmetrical.

 

peanut letters ace-k? cut that shit out bro

 

...damn it.

 

Bout to turn 17, been drawing for about 5 days now.. Really liking it and progressing every day but having some trouble with my tag. Ignore 'Snark', i was experimenting with names but wasn't feeling it. Peace.