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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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  2. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    oh k dope thanks kroe, i appreciate it.

    mnNice-that looks sick, i like ur handstyle its clean and fluent. hole thing looks dope...its trippy how i use to practice this name...never came close to being as nice as that though lol. the bottom part of your second E seems to be shorter then the bottom part of the first, but that just minor shit
     
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  3. KroeGHK

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    this is what i mean, the r on the right isnt my best R but you can see the general idea
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  4. DEMPO

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    got this new kodak digital camera @ the pawn shop only 50 bucks brand new!
    humor I was wondering what happen to u, cred too.
     
  5. Mildstyles

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    4eyes the letters themselves are nice buut i woulda spaced the S a little farther. Keep it up
    Kroe space your words out hahha i was trying to read them and it was hard
    Dempo dont add extra bars like on top of the O, that e is awkward too so try a normal one for a lil. And the top of the M is wicked chunky, make the bars of the legs go up higher to get ride of that
     
  6. KroeGHK

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    lol i dont normally write like that i promise
     
  7. wolvf

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    Local Hip hop crew has asked me to get writing again. Have not touched pen to paper or can to finger for at least 9 - 10 years, any thoughts?
    I really don't like the green shadows on the O etc. too much. And pretty poorly filled I think.
     
  8. Mildstyles

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    Crits? Besides my poor color choice.
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  9. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    can I get some crits on my P
     
  10. KroeGHK

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    @mildstyles your N kinda looks like an IU or 7U and careful with that e its almost turning into a P
    @dempo dont bend that P so much if at all or if you must, try bending it the other way ever so slightly, that E is still a bit off (the middle part is cut off or short)
     
  11. cred1384

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    @Tempo Nice job on keepin it clean man i'm really digging that. the bend in the P looks funky and the left bar of it gets too far at the top. and you drew a 3d line in black on the p but no where else (but i'm sure you are aware of that one haha) good shit man. keep it up.

    Haven't been able to sketch much due to travels and shit. Sketched this up earlier.
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  12. pover

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    I liked the poor color choice, and the "Need more arrowz!!11!one!!
     
  13. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    bitches love it when you write out their names....some wicked old shit from past books
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  14. H1P30N3R

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    kroe- really diggn the jamie piece shit is nice man
    tempo- Idk bout the bend on that p man
    naked- moar arrowz bro
    cred - nice man

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  15. Kaze

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    thanks for the advice, il take out those lines from now on

    Tempo- looks clean, just make the bottom bar of the P straight any maybe make the O more round at the bottom

    Cred- the D comes up a little to high but it all looks really good, i like that R

    kroe- those all look dope, the alexa one is my favorite but the X doesn't really match i dont think

    hipe- that looks clean, i think if the middle part of the O was alittle bit more rounded it would look better but that could just be me, other then that one thing it looks good, the 3d is dope too
     
  16. wolvf

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    KroeGHK like your style mate, great form and flow. would like to see more black and white fill. think it would suit, but thats just personal tastes.
     
  17. KroeGHK

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    that was intentional lol i hate X's with a passion, glad you like the rest though

    and @wolvf i hate doing fills, for various reasons, i'm not really good with them, im lazy as shit, sharpies are spontaneous and unreliable at times, and people often use fills as a crutch to distract from letter forms which i try to focus more on developing, maybe someday when i grow up ill start doing more elaborate fills lol
     
  18. Kaze

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    ^yeh X's seem like a pain in the ass to draw.


    wolvf- that looks sick, i think it looks better without the coloring though but the black background thing is dope
     
  19. DEMPO

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    need crits on my p's
     
  20. MN Nice

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    So much better ^ do a regular O though