Oh, nevermind, they both say Erika.

 

ya hah, it's not bad, feelin the e

 

I'm not. Only decent letter is the R.

 

Its better than the other stuff youve posted but it needs work, 3D is off in spots.

 

i smell a battle

 

OOH SHIT, lol.

 

Kew1- Not feeling the bottom of the K, hope it got you some ass tho
Siko-last one u posted was looking fresh

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hahahaha

(I'm hoping that's a joke.. because that's a stupid reason for a battle.)

 

yo ATESKONE- Thanks for the comment.

REDEYEZ- LOL no doubt, damn a L would feel good right bout now. i got 2 more weeks an im out this bitch for a lil vacation. going to Thailand, then i can enjoy the grapes and chocolates and strawberry phillys.

MOIST- yo all i see is crits from you. mabye i missed your flick, but how bout posting something so we can all crit your work. -No Beef- just curious to see how well you do being that you have so much to say.

 

you beasted on the L's length on the first one, make it smaller next time.

EDIT: i totally see where you're coming from. but no thanks, i'd rather not post stuff on here. however, wouldn't you agree that what i said was still valid in some way?
like i'd be like "that shit's trash", but to balance out the insult i give em' crits.
so it's not like i'm on here trolling people n' shit.

 

So here it is, Fuck it, i'm not finishing it. the color scheme didnt come out the way i thought it would, the gaps in the brick look to damn big, the damn tape got in the way. i'm just gonna leave this one alone. move up to something else. you guys can imagine the background with all brick. i may, in my free time eventually fill it in but not now.

 

oh yeah.... HAPPY HOLIDAYS !!!! HAHAHAHAHA that was gonna be the whole point of the drawing.

 

dude, make the the gingerbread man's arms....idk how to put this, but you made the arms look like they were behind it's torso, so next timeif you do the bombin' gingerbread man, don't close the uppertorso where the arms meet it, instead make it all one whole thing.

 

new lil burner... blurry pic

 

yeah i know what you mean, i can just take the brown paint marker and go over the lines then it will make one whole body.

 

Wow, thanks a lot guys, it really motivates me when I get positive crits, that I'm progressing in the right direction I'll keep on writing and posting it here, thanks again.

RedEyes:I like the letters but i'm not diggin' the backgorund
FlippinChickens: Your 3D is off, and try using bars for letters
funhouseXcast: I like your 2nd piece, good job.
Kewl1: I'm not feeling that extention on the right bar of A
dr0ping: Ur 1st piece, i think it's ok
Zookyook: Fresh piece

Peace, Rolin

 

nice work zoo..really feelin the handstyle
kaso nice simple
droping..youre on your way

well heres some quick sketches i did at work

 

thanks.... wish i had a job where i could do that..... i like the bottom one, they look pretty close to identical as far as lettering goes though... mix that shit up yo!

 

getting my hand in form
getting some colig down so i can transfer some ideas from that into a tag

not that keen on the second t or a