Daily Operation Skewr: looks fresh..you should trace it and fill it. Astro: Only thing wrong I can see is the R looks like a B, otherwise, I am liking the white letter face and deep color 3d. I try to sketch one full piece a day, always in a different style. Keeps my head into my letters and illustrates my improvement... like a graphic journal. These are the ones from yesterday & friday. Saturday Friday as always, feedback and criticism encouraged
not sure if theres one from t.dot. but there is a rasek who kills it during the summer time here in ottawa.
lookin for some crits on these outlines, bottom one is a semi-wild i did in my book [Broken External Image]:http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6508/20120202130831.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1698/20120129113230.jpg KRST (no 3d in this, will be going to the bottom or straight right.) [Broken External Image]:http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/6814/20120128210202.jpg
not ugly flow, but your color choice is interesting. don't really like how you drew lines on other letters, the lower A and K, if it was intentional. that middle part of the K gets me every time. stick with the upper case though its got more potential and btw i remember i still gotta finish you're exchange, been kinda lazy with finishing older stuff.
ohh yeah i remember that exchange no big deal though you dont have to do it, but yeah i remembered your last crit about the line in the middle of the k during my outline hahaha but i did it anyway because im retarded. yeah the lines were intentional, but thanks for the crits man
kwu - that's cool, but i wouldn't have extended the bottom of the A's that much MN nice - so i guess im not the only one who hasn't been sketching much haha, and sorry man but i don't think that looks very good, too many corners. u have put out much better work before don't know how i should finish this one this is a quickie i just did a couple seconds ago
ewal keep it up....kwu did you use a pen for the 3d..? sketches from the week didnt get a chance to upload working on a throw up....feel free to crit [Broken External Image]:http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5809/img0018sg.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8956/img0016iv.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8871/img0015bp.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/8004/img0013fs.jpg shouldnt have coloured in this sketch it wrecked it [Broken External Image]:http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/3769/img0012fx.jpg
Atman - That piece is sick.. EWAL - You want to focus on using bars mate, bars bars bars until you've got bars falling out of your eyeballs when you're sad and shitting bars when you've eaten too much. Dane - The first two throwies are nice, but the rest need alot of work. Take the second from bottom one and work on that style, it'll give you the structure you need. Reads SKOPE, haven't posted up here in ages. Only noticed how shit the S looked after putting it on the computer. Not finished anyway, but crits would be cool..
Finally changed it up a bit... still off though, gotta work my way out of this funk im in. I dont even know
it looks like u got somthin goin xylene but clean it up some , i like the second one colors just not how the a touchs the right side of the k , not feelin the s skope , dane the one just above the blue one is the best work with that style some more , ewal the WA by itself hass the most potential i'd say , MN looks good and kwu killin this page . Here are couple things for the battles , i hated the halo on the middle one but kinda gave up on the piece
Colors - I'm digging you are trying new things. Keep trying at the swirls. I try to keep my swirl the same size all the way through it instead of narrowing it as you go. Try both of them, it gives off different effects. EXAMPLE :