@Peter I like the top but not sure about the pointy haha like you said. just looks strange.
@emace pretty nice, idk about the lines on the letters though.

New stuff

 

@PETER i think you need to space it better and clean it up a lil bit @emace get rid of that thing on the G and put more umph on your E
@CRED work that handy with some steez and connect it all the way through itd be dope

 

Looking better Cred, nice. Your R covers the E to much, and fix the R in the handstyle too!
Like dank said, fill a 100-page composition book with just handstyles. As a matter of fact I should do that too.

EDIT: Dank I think I really like that sketch. I can't really tell...so ink it in! And LYFE...that monkey oh my god I love it.

 

haha that's what i did to get it to that point alone.

 

Another couple hundred pages won't hurt. And I mean fill as much space as possible per page haha

 

any crits?

 

yo cred I've been seeing yyou post your stuff a lot, and all i can say is just make sure that underline, hits your letters, and it'll improve it a lot
and lol risk, I'm not even christian and i think thats offensive, fuck hahaah.

 

Thanks for the tips

@Risk Not sure about the bubbles.

twoo (I did the tag before i read your post aiko. Next time i'll fix it)

 

Hey lemme know what you guys think. It's a bit off, when I paint it I will fix up the disproportions.
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A few more sketches, trying to stick with the basics and get clean letters. Crits?

Dempo: I'd outline that shit darker, your bleed through from the other side is distracting to say the least.
Emune: I like the style, definitely need to clean up proportions though. Your second E is tiny, and maybe even out bar sizes.

 

zeek, you suck at graffiti. quit now. its not the hobby for you.

and that purple one is the worst.

 

Damn, calm the fucking beef. He is doing what he should be doing: "trying to stick with the basics and get clean letters." That being said, work on the first one and keep working with the second one. Tweek it, and it can be a pretty nice basic throwie. If you want to draw that cleaner, start off with the bottom wavey line, and draw out about four of those, try to get them all the same shape and length, then draw in your letters. IF that makes any sense... It's what I used to do when experimenting with those letters. Looks good though, keep it up and don't let fags like this^^ get you down.

 

Cred your shit has been growing on me lately. Keep it up man.

 

yeah. keep it up cred,
really feeling alot of your recent pieces.

 

@ CRED keep it up man, looking better everyday
@zeek you got good basic son. work on your handys and simples. fill a book man, these guys on here got it right with that. helps alot BAS xchange

 

Thanks for the motivation, always helpful and welcome.
@Mike dope. maybe make the white inline a tiny bit thicker? sick Hong Kong Phooey.

Might be headed in the wrong direction with this one but just felt like tryin it.

 

thats fuckin ill Emune.

++good stuff cred, i don't know if you want to be popping the bottom of the c and e like that though, bit awkward.
underlines good though.

@myke thats clean as hell

and Zeek i actually dig the first drawing, i think that could look really sweet up on a wall.

 

Lol you arent much better.