i love that you just contradicted yourself first you tell me im not ready and that i need to go back to simples now youre telling me add "doo dads"
Finished. O looks like a bottle opener ... Clouds were added at the last minute, and look like shiiitttt. For a battle with Dookie. C looks like a G. Simple sucks major d*ck. Boredom. Working on throws. More boredom.
yeah sorry about that I already apologized, i made a mistake your one with simps ive seen your shit youve dong simps forever, its time to get intricate now but keep letters
i have some complete simples but it just gets kinda boring, i guess i'm just anxious haha thanks i'm gonna keep trying
^ You never get over doing simples. Your letters have odd line-weights, so I'd say stick to simples for now.
luze go simple dont cut lines or nothing like that crits [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3117.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3118.jpg
i dont think u understand..i cant control these ideas that pop into my head i just fucking draw them not everything i do is a simple that shit gets mad boring
but your throw STILL looks like toee and your bars are still uneven so although your getting all these ideas you still havent improved on any aspect of graff.
na man u can tell its a f on the right one ur just being gay and you have no idea how much ive improved hop offf ma'cock
haha no cause you think your really good but you still need improvement. the right one looks like an F because you took your time one it. the left one is rushed and says toee. and that piece........well anyways believe me NO ONE is on your cock besides your right hand buddy. so just work on evening your bars and actually making an F when you do your throw fast. good day
BUT YEAH, LUZE... before you get to far in creativity you start simple. I usually pencil my letters simple then add detail then marker it up.
both those luze's are nice fitzy id say thicken the middle bar in your Z and sher maybe modify your E to make it flow bettter with the other letters.
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maybe bars arent for you man with all respect i think bars are holding you back, there just a starting block you know
when you are giving someone crits try to say their name before saying the crit so we know who you are talking to flipping chickens: SIMPLES!!!!!!!!!! i know they suck but do them bc you are putting too much random bullshit in your pieces luze: get ride of the cuts. not doing bad.