Vok- Those letters dont flow. The red K is a completely different style. And try putting them closer together.
Fube- the lowercase jr looks way better. Work on the top of the r though.

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Phat- Feeling the H in that Hope throwy
Eles- I agree with Norf, bring the letters closer together and scrap the K. I also think you should focus more on finding an O that flows rather than decorating it. You know?

 

work on that w man

 

Better?

 

i'm not 100% positive what it says, but i like it.
NiT_vp ...what could that possibly be? I'm sure it'll be apparent when you say :]


as per previous crit, i simplified my throw 'style.'
Apparently my old one wasn't "working for me." yah i'm bitter!
Legible or not?

 

looks like it says RER.....and yo wilbur...no...you did the exact same w...

 

Why do you use ellipses so much?
Similar, not the same. I wanted to stick with a similar style. Scrap or what?

 

Temp- Like the fish, but for whatever reason, I didn't see it at first lol
Dunno if I brought the "boner" (lul) down enough or if I should try to find a different "W".

 

Yeah, you need a new W. Or a new name. I mean wilbur?


@ Ridiculous : I've taken enough time doing this anyway, but here is my point.
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Exactly the same. And sure your last R is different ONLY because on the right leg you did a half spade...the point is dude that they shouldn't look that much alike, you should be able to tell which letter is what very easily. peaceeee *****

 

^the A looks more like an R than the R does lol

 

i tried the two dots n it didnt look good so i just did this
1st - stick with the one liner n if people cant read it fuck it
2nd - just make it more legible

 

try and make the j a little bit smaller or the r a little bit bigger.

 

alright im happy with my throw up now thanks for all the input .. now this is another one ive been working on, changed the bottom of the R n made it more cartoon like

 

the top of the r comes down to far. bring it up so it doesnt make it looks like a munchkin or some shit

 

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Still trying to get a good R, I think this ones better than what i had yesterday.

JR make the line in the middle of the J come down farther, and work on the r.
wilbur try to make each letter level, and that doesnt look like an L.

 

really diggin that throw norf props

 

I missed PESO day, so I made a quick contribution. Should've made the top of the P a bit bigger, but oh well. Lazy styles.

 

pesoes just has a nice flow and of course your hands are clean