Damn man that's good, Diggin' the fill, but that S could use some work. but keep up the great work man. CareGr - The D looks really cramped up and squished in that area. crits?
Wait Says 'sezt' rite..or 'sezr'? I feel like the top of the z looks too plain add one em lil bars like at the bottom If its an r then it looks pretty good if its a t it looks like an r
Wait Says 'sezt' rite..or 'sezr'? I feel like the top of the z looks too plain add one em lil bars like at the bottom If its an r then it looks pretty good if its a t it looks like an r
slek - im glad u understand the way i paint,i sometimes just like to have fun regardless of the outcome empty - ill take the crits only if i can agree with them,period. sezr - i think the z should go more down so it can fit with the rest of the letters and not be tilted like that..thats the best ive seen from u,keep practicing!
Obviously were not all gonna agree with each other. But that's the point of posting. To get other opinions and critique. If your just gonna disregard what everyone says because your opinions vary THEN STOP FUCKING POSTING!
i like this. looks like some of my older stuff. i recommend one vanishing point, rather than a vanishing line.
tofe real shit, you've been part of this site since nov 2008 and your progression looks like you started writing last month....you've listened to ONEof the tips i gave you since you've been on the site. you suck. you show no progression and whenever people try to give you honest crits you act like a little bitch. now im not trying to be a dick but honestly graff just might not be your thing. everytime you post you look like your trying SUPER hard. so either start over simple, and by simple i mean thats all you do. not going back to simples for a week then posting more of that whack ass style saying you got simples down. or you can just quit graff. real shit man.
crits? tofe- lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends
Fuck the Tot Black Books thread, the majority of you guys don't give decent crits, since none of you know what is right about it.. fuck man. Alright, I'll do it right now. CareGr: Your crew is really called "Vandal Kids?" Oh wow. The character is overly generic, not to mention ugly. And wtf is up with his teeth? the letters are alright, except for that S, and those cans are hideous. If you're doing something simple, at least make it clean. drOping: That's wack. You're getting way too ahead of yourself, and you don't understand proper letter structure yet. That background's pink cracks are pretty sick though. Go simpler. Flask, your bar thickness is way off in most of those letters, and you should learn how to draw an uppercase R. Also, the E should overlap the Z, not the other way around. Best thing on the page though. Tofe, you should quit graffiti. Because you suck. and you have a big head.
lol, i've seen this happen before. like people writting for mad long without progression at all or only a tad bit if any. i personally think the people that are like that don't know what to practice specifically, and that's what immobilizes them in terms of skill. people need to learn what to practice or else they'll never progress, in my opinion.
iv said this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many times practice letters letters only not peices not fills not arrows not anything but letters lots and lots and lots of letters.
Good shit... This is so write... Also they need to learn the roots and appreciate graffiti art for what it is because without the love for it you will lose motivation without motivation you will not have any progress in your skills as a artist.
Thanks for the crit, and I'm sorry but the crew name is nothing I have any control over. First of all, the crew's been around since 2003-2004 (I didn't start before recently though) and they've been getting up a bit, so it would be pointless to not keep going with it. It could also be called "Vestkyst" which basically means Westcoast in norwegian. Anyways, thanks for the crit, and the char is being modified, that was just a quick sketch. Finished version will be up tommorow. The cans are just a quick outline of what they're going to be too.