[Broken External Image]:http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/P1020286.jpg crits ??...i did this in school so yeahh.. eskimo- damn i wish i was good enough so i can do some graff for my girl also on calor with the purple- the white just makes everything pop out more so i would just color it in,,,i think mers-- shits dope
Bump. Neaz - Try 3D and practice with it, since I've seen you do this a lot. Strangers- Looks good, but I can't really see it. Jema - I don't like the second J, it just looks weird to me. Eskimo - I'm digging those color schemes.
damnn fury n yeah i know im trying 3-d right now but you gotta PRACTICE them simps cause that 3rd page with the F looks ughh.
Bome: check the new to graff thread; your letters are all different sizes and the 3D is off. Go simpler and learn about bars. Neaz: Am doing haha. Just making sure I'm progressing from how I did a month ago.
Eskimo - Your pieces are lookin' incrdible. Keep it up. Jema - I feel like the MA in the first piece are a bit too big. But overall it's lookin' good. Bome - No need to call anyone a douche. Just work on your bars and keeping proportions. As for me.I'm hoping these proportions are better than the last few. Crits?
ok im not done i just kinda stared over. working on letter structure and proportions. AND BARS!!! like i said not done with this... but what ya think
Sin - getting better dude, but your bars are different sizes, try to keep the same direction bars, the same size. noir - also looking much better
Sin - Keep bars the same size. Noir - I really don't like the negative space on the I, but I'm not sure how you can change that. Cyto - How can I make it better? Try adding some 3D to that, I wanna see how it turns out