Zeta go simple bro, before you work on flow between your letters and shape you need to get everything cleaned up so work on making your 3d the same everywhaere and alot more even, also usually you do the first letter caps and then the rest lower case or you do all capital letters keep working on it bro and as for your black lines what kinda marker are you using?

 

Thanks for the crits bro, personally I like the e and a that way, but you're saying I should make the z capital or something? I dont really get it... I'm using On The Run 830 graphic twin markers, on a MTN blackbook (dunno what kinda paper that is). It's like the ink is far too agressive for the paper, it leaks right through the pages.

 

@ Zeta, you got some good ideas, but you should try sketching things out in pencil, so you can fix things that are not straight or wobbly.
Crits please.

 

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yo flat if i didnt know what it was supposed to say i would prolly think it says OLAO or sumthin the T at the end looks like a O and the F looks like an ) and with the hook thing at the top the L cud be a Z same with the hook on the bottom of the A it cud be tooken for a B but its clean as far as i can see so props on that

 

i dont like the extention on the end

 

this is my club soccer team ignore the terrible tag on the side but yea it says elm grove imma put it on a sweatshirt so yea crits please

 

Your lines are too crooked and awkward, I'd avoid putting that on a sweatshirt until you can come up with something crisp, or atleast cleaner.

 

it says soccer club and alright thanks but ive got my width, 3D and bar width down atleast right?

 

your 3D is fine, but your bar widths are still not. and the letters lack tons of style

 

lookin kinda like kid acne's letters

 

I looked him up and because I was curious and I can't find any writing of his that looks like mine.

 

ELMO - Don't put that on a sweater, I probably sound like an asshole, but just don't.
ANEK - I like the first one but dont make the E overlap the N and make it so the bars coming off the k aren't squished like that.
I don't really want crits on the little guy's head poking out, but go ahead if you like
I changed the bar widths a bit. Once I get this down I'm gunna work on extensions, any tips on them?
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Jest, it's perfect, your mission: paint this baby 3 times this weekend
please for fuck's sake. start bombing that shit man, I'm begging you

 

I dont have the paint, the hardware store in my town is unbelievably hard to rack from. Im 13 too so the only option i have is to sneak out real late.

How do I know when Im ready to move on to the intermediate thread?

 

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unfinished... crits?

 

i cant really crit that much
top ones lookin good though


im enterin this in the piece battle, i have yet to add the background, but im tryin to get crits on the letters and such

 

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