thanks for the crits everyone! fuckin with a drop shadow now

 

garfobs looking good dude, try doing the highlights in a light colour. but nice to see you here.
-R15K03 ON3R

 

First post! new here, been stalkin for a minute, just lookin for some crits.

 

aman- i cant even read that
hipe- dope throws as always i cant find anyhting wrong

Can i get some good ol crits?
Fudged up my K. Try to look at the K as not a hole in the middle of the 2 legs, but the 2 legs overlapping. That's what i was going for but then i realized people would think its a hole...

and ran outta space for the D

 

the way the right of you k and left of your e both are pointed is somewhat akward, but besides that, thats pretty solid. a is getting too covered, i suppose.

 

Yo didnt really get any crits, anybody?

 

crits please ? crits please ? and can someone help me out our give me some different ideas for my letter R...eww i hate R's lol but I gotta learn..

 

found a abandoned building and had some fun today

 

Zerd, the drop shadow in the bottom left of the Z is a little fucked up
sense, the bottom red N, i feel like it doesn't flow that well with the rest of the throw

 

You straight up Jacked Seen's letters in that last red throw...

 

Yo straight up wasn't trying to jack shit my friend

 

a drunk throwie. meh pretty wack

 

But I see where your coming from I like my other throw better anyways

 

Hey pal, i'm not your friend. lol jk bro. I like how simple you have your throws at an early stage I would guess. It seem that you are going in the right direction. Those are some cool looking spots to drop those pieces to by the way

 

Thanks mang yeah that spots dope it's I old like mini mall thing been a downed for like three years I went down there with two cans of paint and had myself a good ol time haha

 

Naked I like that. You could do something more with the D i guess.


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love that N

 

sense i like that first throw
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