Okay, The top one I can see working. SNOE seems original enough, and it's got a nice fluency. The letters "S" and "E" I see work well often, and it helps that the "O" is in the center. The "N" could also work. I would browse other peoples work, and then try out a style. You might not even bomb "SNOE", maybe something else, signed with your tag. Just write each letter out, make it 3D, bend it, twist it, and write it over and over, until it works. I see potential in you based on your handstyle.
it says the chemical kid i do a lot of chemicals and my style resembles that im fine if people cant read it sometimes its fun if people just look at it as a symbol as long as i know what it says my job is done thanks for the crit tho i do more legible things it just gets boring after a while as im sure you know it was also done with a pen which made it hard to add flair so i compensated with style
Post some legible work. It seems you're hiding behind excuses for your lack of understanding of form and flow. Not trying to hate, but I'd just like to see some legible work and go from there to produce a more "chemical" style, as you put it.
toy question so all i can do is practice and devolpe a clean hand style right ? im having a really hard time with fitting the "L" in slay .. tipps plz ?
Get on Microsoft word and change your font to Arial. Turn your caps lock on. Write out "SLAY." Copy that over and over and over, etc until it looks clean as fuck. After this (and this will take a while) Start bending your bars, keeping the original consistency and flow of the letters in mind. Start small. As long as it stays consistent and clean, you'll probably have a decent handstyle. And soon you'll begin developing your own style. Don't be afraid to emulate some better writers for inspiration if you get caught in a rut BUT DONT BITE! Inspiration is the key word. That's really what you need to do. You're forcing style when your hand is definitely not steady enough. START BASIC.
Can someone just copy and past that^ for when the next scrub asks how to write a decent hand? This thread is the same convo over and over.
Moner- I like that M, the N would look good if you made it like the first half of the M. Not feeling the R, personal opinion though. Just made this one. I'm still working on it, looking for advice though. [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/3746/newishu.jpg