lmfao i have heard tht before but no i wont lol

 

im not going to

 

bump for crits

 

I really like everything except the D, the ESR is tight. Idk whats bothering me, it might be the line going down the middle of the D makes the right part look too small and the left size look too big?

 

thanks mild, do u think i should just take out that line or shorten it and maybe even make the left bar/side bit smaller?

 

Hmmm maybe try making the right side bigger by moving the line to the left, don't trust me though haha

 

mute by MR S3V3N OH F1V3, on Flickr

 

il try moving that line to the left to create some more space

keaze that looks dope

 

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i like the P in plif, the M in omiz looks off though, the different sized legs looks weird like thath

 

that mute lookin decent but that outline is a bummer tho but oh shwell

 

can i plz get some crits on this, i tryed doing wat mild said and made the left part of the D smaller

 

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Old blackbook pic

 

Gotta work on your shadow.its all over the place and. Diff sizes..

 

kaze - the shadow is going the opposite direction on part of the S and u missed a spot on the back of the E, but i like it and it does look better with that part of the D smaller

lostyoursense - the extension on the A is unnecessary and i think it would look a lot better without it

dream - needs more arrows

 

@ ewl24.yea that was jus some quick shit for my girl

 

2 new boys before i get ready for my battle with Mildstyles, the w in the first kinda throws shit off because i fucked up the width