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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    smaller pics=better crits
     
  2. major"LEAG"

    major"LEAG" Member

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    DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing.
    SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.
     
  3. markingz.

    markingz. Banned

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  4. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    crits? tried to do something different. looked better earlier on

    ai40.tinypic.com_2eb4lc0.jpg
     
  5. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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  6. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    ai616.photobucket.com_albums_tt250_slerk_March_24_1924.jpg
    should i finish?
     
  7. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    your should straighten your letters, lose the extensions and fix that W. Then finish it.
     
  8. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    The way the letters bend in places is just awkward. And don't lay out that W. Especially with that bar on it.
    No, no nononooo.
     
  9. mista_dza

    mista_dza Senior Member

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  10. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    personaly i like that fukew just keep atter it will be clean in no timee
     
  11. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    wat do u mean dont lay out the w? like take it out? and shesh thanks man
     
  12. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..
     
  13. pookienuts

    pookienuts Senior Member

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    i kinda went over board its hard for me to tell when to stop and simplify...

    sear

    ai81.photobucket.com_albums_j203_idleon3_IMG_3375.jpg
     
  14. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    mmmhh id say look at the letters youve goin on there n give em a fat black outline without all that stuff extension crap..and all the "cuts"
    ..just the pure letters n see what you got n try to develop from there , make them sheer letters fit n flow

    still way too un essential shit much goin on...and the essential shit aint lookin too good
     
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  15. pookienuts

    pookienuts Senior Member

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    thanks... i tried to simplify a bit more

    ai81.photobucket.com_albums_j203_idleon3_IMG_3378_1.jpg
     
  16. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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    kinda reminds be of saber, cool shit yo im curious to see how it would look with 3-d or shadow..
     
  17. RemoZ

    RemoZ Senior Member

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    Well Sear if you could paint that it's be dope but anything other than an amazing fill would be whack
     
  18. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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  19. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    K and E are whack, dude
     
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  20. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    3 people told you to change that w