DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing. SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.
The way the letters bend in places is just awkward. And don't lay out that W. Especially with that bar on it. No, no nononooo.
not finished yet, just working on the essentials for the night, anyway crits are nice , also that goes for what fill etc.. [Broken External Image]:http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00217.jpg goodnight
The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..
mmmhh id say look at the letters youve goin on there n give em a fat black outline without all that stuff extension crap..and all the "cuts" ..just the pure letters n see what you got n try to develop from there , make them sheer letters fit n flow still way too un essential shit much goin on...and the essential shit aint lookin too good
Well Sear if you could paint that it's be dope but anything other than an amazing fill would be whack