Kew the color scheme is okay but i dont like the K. Crits? Edit: i know the L is horrible View attachment 551532
looks alright polar. loose the little kick off the bottom of the P. also looks like your letters get smaller as they go. work on making them all the same height. round out the inner circle of the A and work on that R. patchy- i'd say go a lot simpler. i cant make out any letters after the L. kewl- that fill needs a lot of work. half of a piece for my next class project. designing a skateboard deck. will say pergatory when finished. [Broken External Image]:http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6492/0325002123.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4420/photoon20100325at21542.jpg tried some new 3D...crits?
atesk-lookin good, id like to see it when finished del-from what ive seen in the past from u, this is definately an improvemnt.
Looks weird with the V having no 3-d even though its still proper. I dont know if your trolling but... if you dont know who sever is you should quit now.
bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K. keep doin what you do! sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol
yeah i know who he is but for right now im just usin the name on paper not hittin the city.thats mainly why i dont use the 2nd e. iv done the straight letter before but i never brought the 3D all the way back to the vanishing point. the v does look weird but thats how its supposed to but ill probably do it again with better 3D next time
nah the 3d follows the VP pretty well. what you should have done is put the VP below the letters. that way the V would have a little more 3d behind it. also dont let your 3D go all the way back to the VP. cut it off somewhere inbetween the letters and the VP.
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make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example
S looks kinda bulkier than everything else, im feelin the letters though Go in single long strokes with your markers >.< looks better in fills.