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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Jwhite

    Jwhite Senior Member

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    and the curve on his letters, lol.
     
  2. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    Kew the color scheme is okay but i dont like the K.

    Crits?
    Edit: i know the L is horrible
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  3. medacog1

    medacog1 Senior Member

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    bimp? crit
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  4. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    looks alright polar. loose the little kick off the bottom of the P. also looks like your letters get smaller as they go. work on making them all the same height. round out the inner circle of the A and work on that R.

    patchy- i'd say go a lot simpler. i cant make out any letters after the L.

    kewl- that fill needs a lot of work.

    half of a piece for my next class project. designing a skateboard deck. will say pergatory when finished.
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  5. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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  6. mista_dza

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  7. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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    atesk-lookin good, id like to see it when finished
    del-from what ive seen in the past from u, this is definately an improvemnt.
     
  8. RedEyes

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  9. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    redeyes-i like that simple but i think that face in the O could be better
     
  10. weakfingers

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  11. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    oh snaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!
     
  12. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
    keep doin what you do!

    sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol
     
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  13. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    yeah i know who he is but for right now im just usin the name on paper not hittin the city.thats mainly why i dont use the 2nd e. iv done the straight letter before but i never brought the 3D all the way back to the vanishing point. the v does look weird but thats how its supposed to but ill probably do it again with better 3D next time
     
  14. viseversa101

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    if u didnt want the v to have any 3d ur vanishing point should go right 2 notbook rings(i guess)
     
  15. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    nah the 3d follows the VP pretty well. what you should have done is put the VP below the letters. that way the V would have a little more 3d behind it. also dont let your 3D go all the way back to the VP. cut it off somewhere inbetween the letters and the VP.
     
  16. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    Wrong-O.
     
  17. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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  18. massacreman

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    make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example
     
  19. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    Stick to the same thickness as that S. Reminds me of OhSnap's older shit.
     
  20. Jwhite

    Jwhite Senior Member

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