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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
    If you look at your W..
    It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
    This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.
     
  2. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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  3. mawks

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  5. pookienuts

    pookienuts Senior Member

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    i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
     
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  6. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts...

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    Crust, bent like the bottom? Or slanted at the top? Sorry it took so long. I don't know why I can't post pictures. Ehh, probably cause I spammed my Troll picture.
     
  7. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.
     
  8. Sesh-it-up

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    rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where.
    kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two
     
  9. soath

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  10. soath

    soath Elite Member

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    the K is wack too, looks like an M or a X, spread it out or just try again, peace.
     
  11. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.
     
  12. soath

    soath Elite Member

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    NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.
     
  13. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    sevr that shit looks good make them all the same as the S and ur laughin.
     
  14. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

    atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

    kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

    rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!

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    ^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has


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    ^ really hate how my t came out

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    ^ another pen freestyle
     
  15. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever
     
  16. pookienuts

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    in progress...
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    tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width
     
  17. Jwhite

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  18. pookienuts

    pookienuts Senior Member

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    try droppin that background tealish color so the letters are more visible ... you notice how that lip on the l over laps to much on the u taking away from it try forming your letters at different angles so when you out the next letter in the work it doesnt overlap to much and hide a major portion of the letter...
     
  19. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size
     
  20. Jwhite

    Jwhite Senior Member

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    i completely missed that haha thanks