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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ChadOne

    ChadOne Senior Member

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    Sake - I like that background on the first one, but you should try to keep all the bars the same width and space out the K and E more cuz they are kinda hard to read.
     
  2. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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    wwillis try to fix that shaky hand and when u kinda mess up go over it again to make the lines smoother
    sake try making the E more spaced out instead of it being nehind the k i like everything except for the last 2 letters

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    crits?
     
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  3. 775SakE

    775SakE Member

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    hey stigma that sketch is pretty cool but heres my 2cents...
    1. i dont really like that effect that covers all those parts of your letters
    2. it definitely needs color maybe adding it to the effect or letters would change my mind about liking the effect.
    3. it would look a lot cooler and flow more if you made all the ends of the letters flow at the same direction if you know what i mean? like the left leg of the R, the left leg of the M, the bottom of the I, the bottom right leg of the K. idk if you understand me but make them all go to like one point instead of the left leg of the R going completely sideways and the right leg of the K going twords the bottom middle of the page.
    4. im not feelin the middle part of the M idk try somethin different.

    But idk thats my opinion but ur bubbles drips and 3d look great man keep it up
     
  4. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    i'm gonna be the one to call this one?

    OhSnap bite

    A and P forsure, the attempt at his colouring style is a giveaway
     
  5. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    looks pretty generic to me..
     
  6. idk401

    idk401 Senior Member

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    did you use white out to cover up your mistakes???........ thats a big No No!!
     
  7. RaveCat

    RaveCat Member

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    Sake: Looks rly cool, but i don't like the extensions on the top S n E, idk myb they're little 2 long? Or changing the directions and position of one o them? Just doesn't flow for me... I like the bottom one, dough.
    Stigma: I like the letters, just myb crowded bit? Myb loosing some of the effects?

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    Crits? Besides the horrible pen control :)
     
  8. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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  9. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    How the fuck are you gonna call a bite on that shit? It's a god damn straight letter. Fucking retard...

    Everyone in here has to do SIMPLES.
     
  10. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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    If I was trying to color a piece like oh snap, there would be about 10 more colors. As far as the lettering, it's basic two or three bar structure with some very light extensions, not exactly a style you can pinpoint to one person....

    But whatever, if you want to call it a bite, I really don't care. It's a piece I'm probably not going to develop anyway, so it ends with that sketch.
     
  11. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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  12. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Sake work on simps
    Prea, i think the P is too small in comparison to the R and i dont like that right extension from the A, but it looks pretty good
     
  13. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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  14. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    im trying to find a new name. Royal just doesnt work for me. I was thinking of rote. My best letters are a,r,e,o so im trying to think of names with those letterrs any suggestions?
     
  15. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    its looking like a whole new batch of toys. people learn straight letters, lose the random bends and twist and learn the basics. ARROWS ARE BADDD!!!!
     
  16. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    ^This
     
  17. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    this guy makes me roflcopter
     
  18. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    drOping Senior Member

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